For my portfolio

I chose three assinments that i thought i did well on for my portfolio. i believe that I made good revisions for them. the application packet I believe was the best. although i did have revisions it looked the best out of the three I chose. Now that i fixed my 3 assignments they all look equal.(☺) that smiley face i learned from the Reading, Writing and Technology packet our class did a few weeks ago. i hope I’m not ruining my basic unit of human thought my doing this assignment electronically. Lol.

Woah!

I use to hate writing because when i was little i always had problems with my sentence structure and also punctuation was a big part of it. This class has helped me get better. As we all say practice makes perfect. i still have some problems but I’m only in my first year of college. I plan to have much more practice in the future hence ill be an amazing writer as i complete my schooling.

How to fix the fused run-on paragraph

As you have read in the previous blog entry. I wrote a really good terrible paragraph that needed revisions. I learned how to fix an what a fused sentence was. although sometimes i do make mistakes as we all do. Hence the reason why pencils have erasers and keyboards have backspaces. no one is perfect.

a fused run-on paragraph!

An example of a fused sentance is no punctuation almost like a run-on sentence hence I’m going to write this paragraph as a run on or fused paragraph this is something i learned not to do in my English class and also something i have learned how to fix i believe that i have learned quit a bit in this class

How i am today.

i have learned many things this semester. all from reading and writing to back flips. what I recognized the most was how i learned how to make good revisions. for example the last assignment we did electronically i thought that i would never figure out how to make corrections that way but turns out that it was easier.

Writing, Technology and Teens!!

In the Writing, Technology and Teens summary i learned a few things that i didn’t already know. For example the electronic communication might be damaging the “basic unit of human thought”. Hence right now i could be damaging my basic human thought my typing this message.I thought that it was neat what people do to make there writing documents more interesting for example smiley faces and symbols.

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